Oomph.
Spare me. Here are the flaws:
1 - Hip-hop-ish beat in the intro.
2 - CD crew? Yet another rip off of the clocks. I never liked the clocks anyway, sothis just bites.
3 - Ever heard of a concept called 'originality'? There are tonnes of clock/lock/noobock videos around. If you're gonna make one, make sure it stands out.